Much, much, much better, Dr Bob! The parody now lives up to the title. Some killer lines; "I forgot how to walk, talk, swallow and pee" was a particular fave. Bravo...555

intoxicating...5s

Perfection! I have no bones to pick! The Doobie Brothers oughta cover this!

wow! thanks for the great compliments. i definitely feel much better about this one. i still had a number of lines i would have loved to have put in the song, but, really, the song is just too short. i told myself i would never use the word 'pee' in a song - it isnt my style, but i couldnt resist the image or the appreciation it would bring to "those in the know" - even if it isnt a side-effect :) -- doobie brothers eh? i could only hope.

Dr. Bob - I didn't see the first version, but this is excellent. Nothing wrong with a little "pee" when put in the right context at the right time...5's ~ ~ ~

paul - lol. thanks. well you know what they say in the music business - context! context! location!...or something like that.

You win The Red-Eye-Fives, man...hey maaaaaann!

I liked the first version better =) (just kidding, this had some great lines...well done)

red-eye 5's eh? i like the sound of that. thanks johnny. jeff - always causing trouble eh? =) thanks

I have to give you credit for the Stoned-cold comment

[SOTM] Sorry, but I DKTOS and was unable to download an MP3. However, an interesting an funny parody nevertheless. Fave line: "Well I've had 20 brownies and 4 bongs full of weed I forgot how to walk, talk, swallow and pee" lol, clever stuff, Bob : )

[SOTM] I think I commented on your first attempt, though I'm too lazy... um... busy to look it up. Well, no matter... Fantastic idea, well-executed.

(SOTM) Some really great lines in here Dr. Bob, and an excellent title that reads effortlessly.

SOTM--I'm a bit jealous of the perfect title...and the parody was great, too!! =)

(SOTM) I'm no big fan of drug parodies, but I have no absolut rule against not liking them either, and this one was funny from the title and all the way down 'til the end dot.

SOTM Hilarious stuff, Dr Bob. Sounds like a lot of research went into this :-))

(SOTM) Newbies can learn a lot from your experience here on the tune. It was a real improvement! Now excuse me, I gotta go to the quickie mart, I suddenly have the urge to buy some Cheetos....555

thanks DUMB ASS KID(funny name) - that line hit me just before i fell asleep. i got up and wrote it on a post-it note. LEO JAY - i can sympathize with your laziness. im also too lazy to go look to see if you in fact did comment on my first song. thansk. RED ANT - thanks. i just wish the song was longer since so many ideas didnt get used. ARWEN - thanks for appreciating the title. my life is now complete. PETER - thanks for being open-minded about this - perhaps you are a druggie at heart. i was hoping that the cuteness of the song and the image it gave would make it not read like a hard-core drug song. DEE - what are you talking about?!? research? um...i...um...i dont know you. i read it in a book :-) AGRIMORFEE - lol. thanks. i do feel much better about this one. hope you enjoyed the cheetos...and chocolate...and taco bell...and...

(SOTM) See above. And well done, great title, and one of the best you've done! Easy to weed this out from the rest =)

(SOTM) Crazy good dude

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thanks JEFF. i wont get angry at your pun - youre just a bad seed. thanks for appreciating my 'stoned-cold remix' title. i was hoping someone caught it. thanks crazy MIKE.

(SOTM) Proof that you can always improve your writing. Great job!

(SOTM) Great title and parody! This is one of those "Wish I thought of that."

(sotm) a gem of an idea for the OS, Dr Bob - and your parody does it full justice

More kudos on the perfect title - and a parody that lives up to the promise. "I knew it would be real good, you got long hair" - heh heh. And I'm glad you lifted your ban on pee - that and the in-laws made that the best verse.

(SOTM) See above!

(SOTM) 5's. Nope, just standard ordinary 5's. Nothing special about them. These are not high 5's, I'm truly positive ocifer.

It is one of those parody titles that makes you think "I wish I'd thought of that"... and very well executed, too.

I know but did you ever write a parody about weed... ON WEED? I especially liked 'Drive me to a safe spot!/Fire away!'

SOTM.. I was trying to think of one for this song. Very well done, Dr. Bob. And might I add a very intriguing topic :) 555

Brilliant title, fine work.

wow, i was away for more than a week and just noticed all the comments. i had a large grin as i read every one of them. i appreciate all the compliments. yeah i am proud of this one - even if i only did get 4 point - 3 by jeff reuben. i could have sworn i got 5 points, but it doesnt even matter :) - 'high 5's' - funny.