Song Parodies -> I'm Puking Up In The Loo
| Original Song Title: | "I Got My Mind Set On You" |
| Original Performer: | George Harrison |
| Parody Song Title: | "I'm Puking Up In The Loo" |
| Parody Written by: | Jason |
It took a lot of me courage to submit this as Ive never submitted a parody of this nature before. Well we know what happens getting too drunk on Friday nights!
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I've been drinking this Friday
A whole gallon of Chardonney
Its somehow making me so queasy
To end up so drunk!
I've also threw up
A whole load of rotton muck
And gonna drink lager and Coke, euuughhhhh
To puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it
To end up so drunk!
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
And this time I am feeling sick
My insides that are slick
I know if I put my feet upright
I know that I really can feel bright
I'm puking up in the loo
In the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
In the loo
I've been drinking this Friday
A whole gallon of Chardonney
Its somehow making me so queasy
To end up so drunk!
I've also threw up
A whole load of rotton muck
And gonna drink lager and Coke, euuughhhhh
To puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it
To end up so drunk!
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
And this time I am feeling sick
My insides that are slick
I know if I put my feet upright
I know that I really can feel bright
I've also threw up
A whole load of rotton muck
And gonna drink lager and Coke, euuughhhhh
To puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it
To end up so drunk!
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
In the loo
In the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I've been drinking this Friday
A whole gallon of Chardonney
Its somehow making me so queasy
To end up so drunk!
I've also threw up
A whole load of rotton muck
And gonna drink lager and Coke, euuughhhhh
To puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it
To end up so drunk!
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
And this time I am feeling sick
My insides that are slick
I know if I put my feet upright
I know that I really can feel bright
I'm puking up in the loo
In the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
In the loo
I've been drinking this Friday
A whole gallon of Chardonney
Its somehow making me so queasy
To end up so drunk!
I've also threw up
A whole load of rotton muck
And gonna drink lager and Coke, euuughhhhh
To puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it
To end up so drunk!
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
And this time I am feeling sick
My insides that are slick
I know if I put my feet upright
I know that I really can feel bright
I've also threw up
A whole load of rotton muck
And gonna drink lager and Coke, euuughhhhh
To puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it, to puke it
To end up so drunk!
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
I'm puking up in the loo
In the loo
In the loo
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nice job on a tune that doesn't offer much to work with...at least ya got it outta your system...the song i mean
Thanks Alvin.
I liked it Jason, and agree with alvin, it's a song that offers little. So you did well. In fact, the OS tends to have your parody effect on me to an extent!
This one should of course have been saved for a Friday submission... ;-)
Thanks Peregrin and Peter!
SOTM - Not bad for it's subgenre. I could hold the repeated parts against it, but given the narrators situation repetetive puking makes weird kinda sense, so I'm alright with that, and it would work for it as a recorded parody (at least I think so).
(SOTM) Ooooh...I've been there on many a Friday night...some Saturdays and Sundays too. And Mondays, Tuesdays...good choice of OS for the parody and you matched it well. I also agree you did a good job with this genre.
Dude!
TMI dude, Too Much Freakin' Information! Not a fan of the topic or the original song so this one didn't do much for me, the only parody of this song that I liked so far was Weird Al's "This Song's Just Six Words Long"
(SOTM-Jul-08)
Bring it up again and we'll vote on it. Been there done that and puked on the tee-shirt.
Bring it up again and we'll vote on it. Been there done that and puked on the tee-shirt.
(SOTM) Repitition is often the joke for parodies of this OS....but there could have been more done here for continued giggles.
(SOTM) Variation would've helped this one a lot. I don't really mind the subject matter if done right - this one, howver, could've used a bit of polishing.
An improvement over the original. I agree with Peter and Aggy, though singing "A whole gallon of Chardonney" over the original was a bit of a retch, err, stretch.
(SOTM) I don't have a problem with "Puking Up in the Loo" repeating, but the bridges really probably should have been varied. I don't know who dinged pacing, I had no problem there, but one thing you may want to watch is changing between tenses. In the second non-chorus stanza you have "I've also threw up" which should be either "I also threw up" or most properly with the rest of that stanza "I've also thrown up", I think this parody proves your potential Jason, just spend a little more time on your art, you started off strong, but then it seemed like you kind of gave up--keep up the good work though Jace!
Good effort here Jason. I have to agree that more varity would have helped that effort.
I can totally picture someone doing this if they've had too much naughty stuff to guzzle. You get a perfect score for this composition.
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