Yesterday, I submitted a parody called "Two Barbers in a Small Town." Admittedly, I didn't strictly follow the principle whereby the number of syllables in each line of the parody matched the number of syllables in the corresponding line of OS. Now in my case, the OS, "If You Wanna Be Happy," by Jimmy Soul, could be catalogued as a novelty song. With less of a focus on artistic excellence, it becomes more acceptable to slip a syllable or so. You write good parodies, but you have a tendency to parody with more syllables than OS. Sometimes removing syllable wasters would fix that. For example you match "I been good" with "Or oh so rude." "Oh" is a syllable waster, perfectly acceptable when you are under the target syllable count. But you were perfect without it. OS has 3 verses of 5 lines each. In OS, lines 3, 4 and 5 are identical. I like that you gave lines 3 and 4 different lyrics for each verse.