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Kevin - February 27, 2009 - Report this comment

This is my first parody and i've got plenty more to follow. I take requests and can usually come up with something pretty quick so let me know. I thought this one was pretty good!

David Strank - February 27, 2009 - Report this comment

Well kevin I must say you are a very good parody artist keep up the good work and I hope to see many others from you in the near future.

frank - February 27, 2009 - Report this comment

sotm lmao good job

Kevin - February 28, 2009 - Report this comment

Thanks!!

Barb - March 02, 2009 - Report this comment

I'm speechless, good thing you can write these parodies!

Below Average Dave - March 09, 2009 - Report this comment

Kevin, the entry you wanted to place in SOTM was posted in March, and we are currently on the February SOTM thread, this song qualifies, when March gets posted (at the completion of the month) if you want to enter the one you initially entered for March, it will qualify for that, however for this month's SOTM contest, this was your only qualified entry, I took the liberty to assume you'd like to enter it instead however if you would rather wait until next month and enter one of the other two and skip this month let me know over in the SOTM contest, I figured being your first month you were looking to get your feet wet in contests, so since you hadn't seen the reply as to how the SOTM works, I tried to make sure you weren't left out by entering this one for you instead. . .good luck and welcome to AmIRight

Matthias - March 12, 2009 - Report this comment

This wasn't bad (except for the reason that I hate Taylor Swift, yuck! She's HOT don't get me wrong, but sappy love-song country crap? No thank you!) A little bit more practice and reading of how other people style their parodies would help you out a lot, but this is a good start for any newbie and I'm glad you found us early cause we'll be able to help you out along the way.

kevin - March 12, 2009 - Report this comment

Thanks dave and matthais I've been reading a lot of the parodies and I am really interested in doing a lot more(so many ideas in this crazy head of mine) thank you for the push and info on how to get better

Phil Alexander - March 17, 2009 - Report this comment

A huge step up on the lyrical pit of darkness that is the OS.. I agree completely with what Matthias said.

kevin - March 18, 2009 - Report this comment

thanks phil more are on the way

Claude Prez - March 21, 2009 - Report this comment

Yeah, what Phil and Matthias said. Nice start and welcome.

Pensworth - March 21, 2009 - Report this comment

Another cautionary tale! There were a few of those this month... I hope this wasn't from a personal experience.

kevin - March 22, 2009 - Report this comment

thanks claude and pens nice to hear from you's thanks for reading

bobpiecheese - March 30, 2009 - Report this comment

(SOTM) A little bit confusing to read through, but I got the general gist of it. Ah well, practice makes perfect, etc. Keep at it, Kevin!

Max Power - March 30, 2009 - Report this comment

Good

Stuart McArthur - March 30, 2009 - Report this comment

(SOTM) welcome to the fold kevin - esp the more intimate SOTM fold - I almost thought you were channeling wannabemustangjockey at first (whatever became of him?) - nice effort and I hope you stick around - 555

Below Average Dave - March 31, 2009 - Report this comment

(SOTM) As others have said, welcome to the SOTM, it's a great way to get comments, praise and constructive criticism on your work. . .Of course you already qualify for next month. My first piece of advise is chorus variation. Think of it as repeating a joke over and over again, every time you repeat a chorus in essence that's what it does, is repeats the joke. On some parodies that works, but on most it becomes as repetitive as the original songs we parody. It also allows you more space to show your comedic genius. If you do choose to repeat choruses, it's always better to type them out (or in many cases copy paste works just as well) so that they can be followed along to the original. Congrats on entering, and remember it's all about getting commentary on what is good and what could be better, welcome to the fold, hope to read more by you!

Arwen - March 31, 2009 - Report this comment

SOTM...I totally agree with Dave (and anyone else who might have said it, I didn't read all the comments) that this would have been better with a couple different choruses. The pacing was off for me...and the layout of your lyrics made it kind of awkward...but I love the OS, and you said "Disneyland," which is like a magic word for me...so this did make me smile.

Invisible Boy - March 31, 2009 - Report this comment

Welcome to SOTM and to amiright. If this is your first parody then I would say it's a fine first effort.
At the beginning it got me thinking about an old song called "DOA" by a band called Bloodrock.

Glen S - March 31, 2009 - Report this comment

Well done. Good pacing through and through. 'he's the kink in my neck' stood out as an excellent sub.

Jeff Reuben - March 31, 2009 - Report this comment

(SOTM) Another welcome! The standard "vary the choruses" comment has been posted, so I'll say that this was a fine job, and I look forward to more of your songs as well.

kevin - April 01, 2009 - Report this comment

thanks to all and thanks for haing a place to express this type of lyrical genius that i'e been reading. i so wish i'd hae found ths years ago but anyways thanks to you all for your help

Blaydeman - November 17, 2010 - Report this comment

Lyrically and conceptually very funny. Although the pacing gets a little off, but still good.

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