I enjoyed this

I was a kid in Doris Day's Day but I recall enough of this song of hers to say - good job, Eye1 !! 5's

I just noticed that comments are posted instantly so I won't rely on the names that I left for you on the last comments that I left to trust opening mail from you. This writer has talent. I believe that the pacing is good. However, I am offended by the cussing and I know that almost everyone in my orbit is too. I rely on God to supply my needs in Jesus Name and He does. You might say that my motto is Phillippians 4:6 plus the account of Jesus, his disciples and the fig tree. God answers my prayers, some instantly and some take a bit of time but they are all answered and cussing God won't cut it. Sorry about the sermon but what it boils down to is that you can write vulgar verse and include lots of cussing but you will lose an extremely large audience. If you are selling I don't think that is too wise. I believe that if the writer keeps it clean that he/she can go far. Joann tenchickens

Joann, First, thank you foe acknowledging that you, a real-life human being, has even viewed this post. I thought that with the exception of a few, new friends, I was the only person on an uninhabited planet! (I've only been posting for about 3 weeks now, and I really enjoy it). Look, we are all creative creatures here. Everything we contribute and submit is for effect: plain and simple. I'm sorry if some of my content comes off as offensive to your personal feelings, etc.. That said, I will attempt to be more aware and sensitive to certain "references" to the Almighty in any of my forthcoming submissions. Eye1