Goodbye Pony World"

Original Song Title:

"The Last Few Bricks / Goodbye Cruel World"

Original Performer:

"The Last Few Tricks / Goodbye Pony World"

Parody Written by:

The Lyrics

I am basing the inclusion of the last few tricks based on Roger Water's tour of the Wall in which there was instrumental buildup attached to completing the wall. In this case, there is a montage of events that tie into eventual executive action about the Equestria Crisis. Sunset Shimmer would be hurt the most by this, as her only means of communicating with Equestria, is the magic book that sends messages to Princess Twilight Sparkle. She would never know what may come to pass, until it is too late. P.A.E.M = Parents Against Equestria Magic, T.A.E.M = Teachers Against Equestria Magic.

(Instrumental transition, the last few tricks, a montage of events)
(Public support for S.A.E.M., P.A.E.M., and T.A.E.M. increases, protest marches)
(Teacher strikes, and S.A.E.M. sympathizers from other schools bring up concern)
(Pressure for governor to do something)
(Final decision made to remove statue from Canterlot High)
(Military and construction vehicles on site for extraction)

(Sung by Sunset Shimmer)
Goodbye, pony world
I won’t trot with you today
Goodbye, Goodbye, Goodbye

Goodbye all you ponies
The portal’s gone away
To a place, I can’t find
Goodbye

With that, this ends the side 1 of "The S.A.E.M. Side" which would be the part of this collection. One side that leads to an anti-magic sentiment, but where would side 2 take the story? I will leave that to the comment section below. The only means by which I will continue to add the second side of songs is if there are 10 different reviews, and/or voting results from the other tracks I have listed. To take some advice from an X-Files episode: "Reviews help us learn." I would encourage that these songs somehow make their way to those who are avid mlp reviewers/critics, voice actors, artists, animators, content creators, and other individuals that can make this project more than it is. If that entails a GoFundMe or Kickstarter be done for financing so be it. Next Track: TBD.

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Agrimorfee - October 15, 2018 - Report this comment

If I can get some sit down time to review this--top to bottom--I will. As I said before, I'd love to see if you can do the entire 4 sides. But, I will have to say upfront (and I alluded to before I think), your story is hard to keep track of for a noob/non-pony fan.

Arch Vile - October 15, 2018 - Report this comment

I have been trying to get pony fans to see my creative works on this website, but I think it is getting miss-communicated as spam or there is means of commitment.

Arch Vile - October 25, 2018 - Report this comment

Ok. I have set up an account on FimFiction.net as a means of getting some feedback on this project that is to be completed. At some point in the future, I would hope to expand on the context of these songs to make a chapter story. I will accept any brainstorming ideas as a possible collaboration. Btw, I have already completed 1/2 of side 2 of the Wall parody.

Agrimorfee - October 26, 2018 - Report this comment

There must be a Facebook group somewhere that would dig what you are doing. Make a post introducing yourself and what you are doing, with a link or two to the opening tracks, assuring them it's not a music video or a spam to something else and ask for some feedback.

Ag - October 30, 2018 - Report this comment

Well I hope you will take my comments for everything as constructive criticism. I mainly took the parodies from a songwriting standpoint, although I have written fiction in the past. I have gotten jibes in the past for being curmudgeonly on finer parody writing techniques, but I enjoy mentoring, what can I say? Good luck in the next phase of your project!

Arch Vile - November 01, 2018 - Report this comment

Thanks Ag. The feedback did help and it was constructive.

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