hey this is my first parody please leave a comment telling me if u liked it!!!!!

I think this is one of the best Hate songs yet. I also love the beatles so ill give alex 5thumbs up! Good Job! I Liked it a lot.

Alex -I gave you "3's" across. Pacing is ok in spots but way off in others. Try counting the syllables in the original and then try to match or at least come within 1 for that line. For Instance, in your line referencing the "oxy pad" the original song goes "And with a love like that, you know it can't be bad", counts 12 syllables. Your line uses 16 so it's awkward to try to follow. I would play around and try to shorten it up. I took a minute and came up with "And with a love like that you should use oxy pads" - you'll see it counts 12, just like the original. It reads cleanly and expresses the same thought you wanted. Still, a good effort. Better to vent when people hurt or tick you off than holding it inside. I use writing a lot to do that, 'cause people and life will always have times when they do that to you and you've got to deal with it and move past it. Things got a lot better when I realized that the opinions of other people only really mattered if they were someone I respected. Those can still hurt but you need to consider them seriously. The others, who really cares, ya' know? Keep writing...keep asking for feedback...It will get easier and be rewarding. Later...

Thanks for the advice Paul!